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IS THE STEREOTYPE GOOD OR NOT

12/2/2016

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IS THE STEREOTYPE OTHER NATIONALITIES HAVE ABOUT SPANIARDS GOOD FOR US?
 
Over the last year there has been much controversy as to whether it is good that other nationalities have stereotypes about us or not. Many argue that having stereotypes is by far the best option, while others claim that don’t have stereotypes has more pros than cons. In this essay, I will analyse the pros and cons in order to come to a conclusion.
Undoubtedly, having stereotypes can be a great way to attract more tourism and to summarize our lifestyle. It’s well known fact that having stereotypes offers you the possibility of attract more tourism, for instance it is absolutely known the Valencian paella and for that a lot of tourists come to Spain, just to try. There is also the cliché that having stereotypes is great because allows tourism know the best things of Spain in a summarized way, for example many studies have revealed that the majority of the stereotypes are true or have been it sometime.
However, when analysed in more detail, having stereotypes can also be a great source of problems. If we look closer, we will realize that having stereotypes isn’t actually all it is cracked up to be. For one thing, stereotypes many cause offence someone. We shouldn’t forget either that stereotypes could very easily lead to the ignorance of the reality of Spain.
Don’t have stereotypes offers you a far wider range of possibilities when it comes to visit a new country or to learn about the country’s lifestyle.
Take for instance, visit a new country without prejudice allows you know thing off the beaten track. Experience shows that this is the best way of travel. Another major advantage is that if you should learn more about this country, take the north of Spain, for instance. In this place there are many sightseeing places, however, it is less known than the south, all places in Spain would be met.
To sum up, even though having stereotypes about Spain has some advantages like attraction to the tourists or lifestyle summary, it can also cause offence and ignorance. Besides, the fact that don’t have stereotypes allows you to visit a new country without prejudice and know the real lifestyle offers a new point of view of Spain, for example the beautiful Picos de Europa National Park or the tasty Saint Froilán donuts, makes it quite clear that don’t have stereotypes about our country constitutes the best option by far.

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TEACHER
12/7/2016 06:39:00 am

HI,

HERE IS YOUR WORK CORRECTED:

IS THE STEREOTYPE OTHER NATIONALITIES HAVE ABOUT SPANIARDS GOOD FOR US?

Over the last year there has been much controversy as to whether it is good that other nationalities SHOULD have stereotypes about us or not. Many argue that having stereotypes is by far the best option, while others claim that NOT havING stereotypes has more pros than cons. In this essay, I will analyse the pros and cons in order to come to a conclusion.
Undoubtedly, having stereotypes can be a great way to attract more tourism and to summarize our lifestyle. It’s A well known fact that having stereotypes offers you the possibility of attractING more tourism, for instance Valencian paella is known WORLDWIDE WHICH MAKES a lot of tourists TO come to Spain, just to try IT. There is also the cliché that having stereotypes is great because IT allows tourisTS TO know the best things ABOUT Spain EASILY. For example many studies have revealed that the majority of the stereotypes are true or have been AT SOME POINT.
However, when analysed in more detail, having stereotypes can also be a great source of problems. If we look closer, we will realize that having stereotypes isn’t actually all it is cracked up to be. For one thing, stereotypes may BE OFFENSIVE. We shouldn’t forget either that stereotypes could very easily lead to the ignorance of the reality of Spain.
NOT HAVING stereotypes offers you a far wider range of possibilities when it comes to visitING a new country or to learnING about the country’s lifestyle.
Take for instance, visitING a new country without prejudice allows you TO DISCOVER off the beaten track PLACES. Experience shows that this is the best way TO travel. Another major advantage is that you learn more about THE country. Take the north of Spain, for instance. In this place there are many places WORTH VISITING, however, it is less known than the south.

To sum up, even though having stereotypes about Spain has some advantages like IMPROVING TOURISM OR PROVIDING A QUICK WAY TO UNDERSTAND OUR CULTURE, it can also cause offence and ignorance. Besides, the fact that NOT HAVING stereotypes allows you to visit a new country without prejudice and (TO know the real lifestyle offers a new point of view of Spain, for example the beautiful Picos de Europa National Park or the tasty Saint Froilán donuts : DO NOT INCLUDE NEW IDEAS IN THE CONCLUSION) makes it quite clear that NOT HAVING stereotypes about our country constitutes the best option by far.

GOOD JOB!
GOOD IDEAS. GENERALLY SPEAKING, YOU SEEM TO UNDERSTAND THE STRUCTURE. YOU NEED TO WORK ON YOUR COLLOCATIONS AND GRAMMAR.

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Dámaris
12/12/2016 02:56:14 am

thanks! I will try to improve that

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